kabhī ai ḥaqīqat-e muntaz̤ar
Published in bāñg-e darā (The Sound of the Bell) (1924).
From: kulliyāt-e iqbāl urdū (Lahore: Shaikh Ghulam 'Ali and Sons Publishers, 1973 (and later reprints), *pp. 280-81*
Notice the layout on the page-- how the last verse is emphasized.
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Urdu spellings reflect adjustments made for the sake of the meter.
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Here's *a serial glossary*.
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kabhī
ai ḥaqīqat-e muntaz̤ar naz̤ar ā libās-e majāz meñ kih hazāroñ sijde taṛap rahe haiñ mirī jabīn-e niyāz meñ |
1) sometime, oh awaited Reality,
come into view in the dress of contingency 2) for all the thousands of prostrations are writhing in my forehead of humility |
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= The wild 'theologically incorrect'
brashness of this verse is irresistible. In effect, the speaker is trying
to cut a deal with God over what God claims as his rightful due already. |
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2) |
t̤arab-āshnā-e
ḳharosh ho tū navā hai maḥram-e gosh ho vuh sarod kyā kih chhupā huʾā ho sukūt-e pardah-e sāz meñ |
1) become joy-acquainted
with clamor; you are a voice, become an intimate of the ear 2) what [kind of] song/sarod is it that would be hidden in the silence of the curtain/tone/fret of an instrument? |
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= 'joy-acquainted' is literal;
the expression may look strange, but no stranger than lots of things in
modern English poetry. |
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tū
bachā bachā ke nah rakh use tirā āʾinah hai vuh āʾinah kih shikastah ho to ʿazīz-tar hai nigāh-e āʾinah-sāz meñ |
1) don't you carefully keep
it safe-- your mirror is that mirror 2) that if it would be broken, then it is dearer in the sight of the mirror-maker |
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= The 'mirror of
the heart' goes far back in Persian ghazal tradition. Traditionally it's
a metal mirror that can be either brightly polished or dimmed by rust
and dust; here, however, it's a newfangled glass mirror that, like a heart,
can be broken. |
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dam-e
t̤auf kirmak-e shamʿa ne yih kahā kih vuh aṡar-e kuhan nah tirī ḥikāyat-e soz meñ nah mirī ḥadīṡ-e gudāz meñ |
1) at the moment of circumambulation
the Moth/'candle-insect' said this: that 'That old effect 2) is neither in your tale of burning, nor in my story of melting' |
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= A kirmak
, literally a 'worm', can also be a small insect, thus a Moth too as it
obviously is here. = But of course, if he says it while going around the candle (and thus preparing to hurl himself into it), how true can his words be taken to be? Or is he saying it as he hesitates, and considers not hurling himself in? = The loss of effect that he complains of is a literary one: it concerns narrative problems, not physical ones. |
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nah
kahīñ jahāñ meñ amāñ milī jo amāñ milī to kahāñ milī mire jurm-e ḳhānah-ḳharāb ko tire ʿafv-e bandah-navāz meñ |
1) nowhere in the world was
peace available; if peace was available, then how/'where' was it available-- 2) to my house-wrecking sin, in your servant-cherishing forgiveness?! |
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= The first line
is a tour de force of resonant sound effects. = The irresistible force meets the immovable object: the speaker's power to sin, urgent and devastating as it is, is hounded everywhere by God's equally perpetual and indefatigable mercy. |
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nah
vuh ʿishq meñ rahīñ garmiyāñ nah vuh ḥusn meñ rahīñ shoḳhiyāñ nah vuh ġhaznavī meñ taṛap rahī nah vuh ḳham hai zulf-e ayāz meñ |
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1) neither did those fervors
remain in passion, nor did those mischievousnesses remain in beauty 2) neither did that writhing remain in the Ghaznavi, nor is there that curl in the locks of Ayaz |
= Four negations,
four losses, obviously connected-- but exactly how? are they parallel,
or do the changes in the second line cause the changes in the first line? = In Iqbal's ghazal tradition, Mahmud Ghaznavi (r.998-1030) had a beautiful slave boy, Ayaz, with whom he shared a strong mutual love; Iqbal seems to invoke this pair of lovers more than many ghazal poets do. |
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jo
maiñ sar bah sijdah huʾā kabhī to zamīñ se āne lagī ṣadā terā dil to hai ṣanam-āshnā tujhe kyā milegā namāz meñ |
1) when sometime I put my head
down in prostration, then from the ground a voice began to come, 2) 'Your heart is acquainted with idols-- what will you get from namaz?' |
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= This final verse
elegantly reminds us of v. 1. = The beloved in the ghazal world is often called an 'idol', both for her beauty and the worship the lover accords her, and for her rivalry with the real God. = The question in the second line could be admonitory ('God can see that your heart isn't in it') or merely impatient ('You're already friends with idols, so what more do you need?'). |
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