javaab-e shikvah
stanzas 6 through 10 (*text with stanza numbers*; *serial
glossary*)
6) |
==Between maa))il and saa))il there's a nice internal rhyme. | |
"Instruction/training
is widespread; there's no worthy skill/excellence [to
receive it]. The one through which an Adam might be constructed-- this is not at all that clay. |
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"If someone would be
worthy, then we give royal splendor, To seekers, we give even a new world. |
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7)
"The hands are strengthless, the hearts are habituated to impiety, The [community of] believers are a cause of disgrace to the Prophet. |
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"The idol-breakers have
arisen [and departed]; the rest who remain are
idol-makers. The father was Abraham-- and the sons are Azars. |
==Azar, Hazrat Abraham's father, was an idol-worshiper. | |
"The wine-drinkers
are new, the wine new, the casks new too, The sanctuary of the Ka'bah is new, the idols new too, you new too. |
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8)
"There were those days too, when this was a cause of attractiveness! There was the coquetry of the spring season, of the desert tulip! |
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"Whoever was a
Muslim, had a madness for Allah, At one time your beloved was this very "go-rounder." |
==See Shikvah, stanza 22. | |
"Through some kind of
'fixedness', now make a vow of servitude, Make the community of Ahmad the Prophet settled! |
==Here, yakjaa))ii appears as the opposite of the harjaa))ii just above. | |
9)
"How heavily it weighs on you, waking at dawn [for prayers]! When do you love us? Indeed, it's sleep that you love." |
==The kab isn't asking for a time, but is an all-purpose sarcastic rhetorical question implying that you don't at all love Us. | |
"On a free spirit,
the restriction of Ramzan is heavy, You yourself say, is this the rule of faithfulness? |
==The daylong fasts
during Ramzan are felt as an
imposition. |
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"The community exists
through religion; if religion doesn't exist, you too don't
exist. If there's no mutual attraction, then there's no gathering of the stars. |
==Here jazb refers to an actual physical force, like magnetism; it holds the stars together in constellations. | |
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10)
"The ones in the world who have no skill-- that's you. The community that has no care for its nest-- that's you. |
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"The harvest that
would be carefree amidst lightning bolts-- that's you. |
==When a crop stands tall and dry in the field, ready for harvesting, it is in the greatest danger of catching fire from lightning strikes. | |
"You who
are notorious for trading in graves-- How would you not sell, if you would get hold of them, idols of stone? |
==Probably the idea is that people exploit their ancestors' reputation, rank, and honor for their own profit. | |
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