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SRF's translation comes, with his permission, from Mir Taqi Mir: Selected Ghazals and Other Poems, translated by Shamsur Rahman Faruqi. Cambridge: Harvard University Press, 2019. Murty Classical Library of India; Sheldon Pollock, General Editor. Ghazal 85, pp. 241-243.
FWP:
(inspired by SRF's translation)
(1) Friends, please excuse me, I'm a bit drunk.
Now give me only an empty glass, I'm a bit drunk.(2) Give me too just a mouthful in each round.
Please don't pour me a full glass, I'm a bit drunk.(3) Intoxication has disordered my speech.
You can scold me if you want-- I'm a bit drunk.(4) Take me in hand, like a glass of wine,
Or else walk with me a little way. I'm a bit drunk.(5) Forgive me if my feet move clumsily.
Don't be cross with me. I'm a bit drunk.(6) It's not as if the Friday prayer will run off somewhere!
I'll go along with you-- just wait a little. I'm a bit drunk.(7) 'Mir-ji you have a hell of a temper!'
'Well, don't get in my face like a wine glass! I'm a bit drunk.'
Zahra Sabri:
Zahra Sabri is a special guest translator for this site.
(1) Friends, please hold me excused – I’m in a drunken state
If you give me another wine-cup, make sure it’s empty – I’m in a drunken state(2) Give me, too, only a mouthful, like this, in each round
Don’t fill up the wine-cup – I’m in a drunken state(3) My speech is confused and jumbled up, due to intoxication
So, you, too, can go ahead and say what you like to me – I’m in a drunken state(4) Either carry me around in your hands, like a wine-cup
Or walk with me some of the way – I’m in a drunken state(5) Pardon me if unwittingly, I make an uncouth move
Don't be annoyed with me, please - I'm in a drunken state(6) It's hardly as if the Friday prayer is running off somewhere
I'll also come wait just a little – I’m in a drunken state(7) "You, Mir sir, are terribly thin skinned"
Don't try, glass like, to be familiar with me- I'm in a drunken state