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FWP:
SETS
MOTIFS == EYES
NAMES
TERMS == PADDINGI don't see why the weeping has to be the beloved's. In fact that possibility never occurred to me until I read SRF's commentary. Why can't the surging fountain memorialize some lover's weeping, as would be much more in the traditional ghazal vein? So I asked SRF, and he replied (Jan 2018):
'Arguably, it could be any eye, any lover's eye. It cannot be his own eye, because speaks of kisuu chashm . But any eye, or a lover's eye, is quite insipid. Stating the obvious, in an obvious way. So it should preferably be the beloved's eye: maybe she was really sad at the lover's going away, or somebody’s going away.'
Note for meter fans: Here's an example where ko))ii has to be scanned as one long syllable. This is rare in later poets, but Mir does it freely.