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0099,
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{99,4}

gu;zre hai lahu vaa;N sar-e har ;xaar se ab tak
jis dasht me;N phuu;Taa hai mire paa))o;N kaa chhaalaa

1) blood emerges, there, from the tip/'head' of every thorn, up till now--
2) in the desert in which the blister/pustule on my foot has burst

 

Notes:

chhaalaa : 'A blister; a pustule, pimple'. (Platts p.456)

S. R. Faruqi:

He's expressed this theme, in the first divan itself, like this:

{233,8}.

But in {233,8} there are many words of padding [bhartii], and even then the mention is of only one thorn-tip being drowned in blood.

By contrast, in the present verse blood is emerging from the tip of every thorn. And through the blood emerging from the tip of every thorn there can also be the meaning that the tip of every thorn is bleeding out of mourning for the bursting of my blister (that is, the thorns have burst their heads). Or else that the water from my blister has made even the thorns fresh and moist, and blood is flowing in their heads. The wordplay of 'head' and 'foot' is clear.

FWP:

SETS == GROTESQUERIE
MOTIFS == DESERT
NAMES
TERMS == PADDING

Part of the effect of 'grotesquerie' comes in because it's hard to make blisters poetic in English (any more than one can do the trick with the 'liver'), because so many of our associations with them are distasteful and what in my generation we used to call 'gross'. We're only too aware that blisters, boils, pustules, pimples, etc. can have all kinds of off-putting fluids in them, not just the innocuous 'water' or serum that the ghazal world wants us to imagine.

Note for grammar fans: The correlation between perfect forms in Urdu and English is often not precise. Almost always it's because the Urdu form is one step farther in the past than the English one would be. Here, it's intriguingly reversed: any English speaker narrating this incident would use 'burst', or 'had burst', rather than Mir's 'has burst'.