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chande : 'Some, somewhat, a few, a little, a while'. (Platts p.444)
chandaa : 'The moon'. (Platts p.444)
man:zuur : 'Seen, looked at; visible; admired; —chosen; approved of, admitted, accepted; sanctioned, granted; —agreeable; acceptable; admissible; —designed, intended'. (Platts p.1078)
FWP:
SRF proposes that the beloved might be the speaker here, and he doesn't seem to find that possibility extraordinary. But to me it sounds like a truly radical idea. For there's nothing at all that alerts or guides us to expect that the beloved would be speaking-- or thinking, which is really just speaking to herself-- the words of the verse. If she could be speaking here, then a substantial percentage of the verses in the whole tradition could theoretically also be spoken by her. All the more abstract, philosophical ones-- are we to imagine them to be just as easily spoken by the cruel, solipsistic beloved as by the meditative mad lover? Wouldn't that considerably change our take on the whole tradition? I am going to keep an eye out for more evidence about this.
The reading of chande proposed by SRF certainly works very well; its touch of vagueness (some people? some time?) is quite appropriate for the bemused lover in the dead of night trying to get a fix on his situation.
But there's also the Hindi-side chandaa , meaning 'moon', and I do love the extra reading that it opens up. Might it be desired/intended (by the moon itself?) that the mad lover should wander around pursuing the moon? For after all, the lover finds that the moon comes to him night after night, all disheveled and seeming to solicit his attention. If we want to take the idea of the moon's dishevelment literally we could imagine it surrounded by clouds, or by the kind of halo created in some atmospheric conditions; but it could just be the lover's craziness at work. Think of the huge loomingness and somewhat chaotic appearance of a harvest moon:
Since this moon shows itself 'very near', night after night, might it not seem to the crazed lover to be seeking him out and demanding his attention? After all, madmen are not called 'lunatics' for nothing. And of course, we know the beloved is 'moon-faced'. Compare{745,4},
in which the beloved is addressed as 'oh Moon', and her droplets of sweat (like her disheveled hair?) shame the stars.
And of course, in any case the whole thing might well be a dream...