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SRF's choices from his intikhab; |
FWP's commentary |
FWP's
miscellaneous notes |
FWP's favorite verses |
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{236x} |
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{237x} |
most verses relatively clear and interesting | |||
{238x} |
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{239x} |
v.3 (p.107) | {239x,3} | ||
{240x} |
v.2 (p.107) vs. 1-6 (whole ghazal) |
{240x,2} | do more verses later? | |
{241x} |
vs. 1-6 (whole ghazal) | {241x,1-6}**; {241x,2}*; {241x,6} (whole ghazal) | extraordinary internal rhyming; hymn to .sa;hraa | {241x,1}*; {241x,2} |
{242x} |
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{243x} |
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{244x} |
vs. 1, 7 | {244x,1}; {244x,7} | ||
{245x} |
v.7 | {245x,7} | ||
{246x} |
v.6 | {246x,6} | ||
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{248x} |
vs. 1, 4, 6 | {248x,1}; {248x,4}; {248x,6} | {248x,1} |
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{249x} |
in divan as part of a qasiidah (this and next) | |||
{250x} |
an actual qasiidah to the Shah | |||
{251x} |
v.3 (p. 106) v.5 (p. 107) |
{251x,3}; {251x,5} | ||
{252x} |
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{253x} |
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{254x} |
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{255x} |
vs. 7, 9 | {255x,7}; {255x,9} | ||
{256x} |
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{257x} |
this and next are ham-:tar;h | |||
{258x} |
v. 7 (p. 107) |
{258x,1}; {258x,7} | ||
{259x} |
vs. 6, 7, 8, 9 | {259x,6} = {29,7x} {259x,7} = {29,8x} {259x,8} = {29,9x} {259x,9} = {29,10x} |
some verses shown with ham-:tar;h {29} | |
{260x} |
-- | -- | (this was an error on my part) | |
{261x} |
{261x,1}; {261x,6} | simple, punchy little verses | ||
{262x} |
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{263x} |
vs. 3, 4 | {263x,3}; {263x,4} | {263x,4} |
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{264x} |
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{265x} |
a fard , only in R1988 | |||
{266x} |
vs. 1-6 (whole ghazal) | {266x,1}; {266x,2}; {266x,3} | do more verses? | |
{267x} |
v. 4 (p. 107) | {267x,4} | in 'Hindi' meter | |
{268x} |
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{269x} |
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{270x} |
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{271x} |
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{272x} |
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{273x} |
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{274x} |
v. 2 | {274x,2}; {274x,7} | ||
{275x} |
{275x,4} | {275x,4} |
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{276x} |
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{277x} |
v. 6 (p. 107) | {277x,6} | ||
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{278x} |
vs. 1, 2, 3, 4 | {278x,2}; {278x,3} | ||
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{279x} |
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{280x} |
vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) | {280x,1}; {280x,2}; {280x,3}; {280x,4}; {280x,5}; {280x,6}; {280x,7} (whole ghazal) | great onslaught of hech | |
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{281x} |
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{282x} |
v. 5 (p. 108) | {282x,5} | ||
{283x} |
{283x,5} | |||
{284x} |
{284x,3} | 'eyeglasses'! | ||
{285x} |
v. 1 (p. 108) | {285x,1} | {285x,1} |
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{286x} |
vs. 1, 2 | {286x,1}; {286x,2} | ||
{287x} |
{287x,6}; {287x,7} | |||
{288x} |
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{289x} |
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{290x} |
vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) | short meter, verses punchy but not complex | ||
{291x} |
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{292x} |
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{293x} |
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{294x} |
{294x,3}; {294x,6} | |||
{295x} |
do the last two verses, maybe? | |||
{296x} |
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{297x} |
{297x,6} | |||
{298x} |
v. 3 (p. 108) | {298x,3}; {298x,4} | ||
{299x} |
vs. 2, 4 | {299x,2}; {299x,3}; {299x,4} | ||
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{300x} |
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{301x} |
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{302x} |
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{303x} |
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{304x} |
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{305x} |
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{306x} |
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{307x} |
vs. 1, 3, 4, 7 (pp. 108-109) vs. 1, 3, 4, 5, 6 |
{307x,1}; {307x,2}; {307x,3}; {307x,4}; {307x,5}; {307x,6}; {307x,7} (whole ghazal) | v. 2 is truly incoherent | {307x,5} |
{308x} |
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{309x} |
v. 5 | {309x,5} | ||
{310x} |
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{311x} |
v. 6 | {311x,6} | ||
{312x} |
vs. 2, 4, 5, 6 | {312x,4}; {312x,5}; {312x,6} | ||
{313x} |
{313x,2} =
{81,11x} {313x,3} = {81,12x} {313x,4} = {81,13x} |
some verses shown with ham-:tar;h {81} | ||
{314x} |
v. 5 (p. 109) vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) |
{314x,1}; {314x,2}; {314x,3}; {314x,4}; {314x,5}; {314x,6}; {314x,7} (whole ghazal) | {314x,2}; {314x,5}* |
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{315x} |
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{316x} |
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{317x} |
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{318x} |
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{319x} |
v. 7 | {319x,6}; {319x,7} | this and next are ham-:tar;h | |
{320x} |
vs. 1, 2, 4, 7 | {320x,1}; {320x,2}; {320x,3}; {320x,4}; {320x,5}; {320x,6}; {320x,7} (whole ghazal) | {320x,2} reuses the second line of {319x,7} | {320x,6} |
{321x} |
vs. 1-8 (whole ghazal) | {321x,1}; {321x,2}; {321x,3}; {321x,4}; {321x,5}; {321x,6}; {321x,7}; {321x,8} (whole ghazal) | this and next are ham-:tar;h (1816) | {321x,3} |
{322x} |
vs. 1-8 (whole ghazal) | {322x,1}; {322x,2}; {322x,3}; {322x,4}; {322x,5}; {322x,6}; {322x,7}; {322x,8} (whole ghazal) | {322x,5} is the naa-aafriidah one | {322x,2}; {322x,5}**; {322x,8} |
{323x} |
vs. 1-9 (whole ghazal) | {323x,1}; {323x,2}; {323x,3}; {323x,4}; {323x,5}; {323x,6}; {323x,7}; {323x,8}; {323x,9} (whole ghazal) | ham-:tar;h of previous two; since they are very early (1816) and this one is extremely late (1867), it's an excellent chance for comparison | {323x,9}* |
{324x} |
vs. 1-3 (whole ghazal) | |||
{325x} |
long swingy refrain | |||
{326x} |
vs. 2, 5 (pp. 110-111) vs. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 |
{326x,2}; {326x,4}; {326x,5}; {326x,6} | ||
{327x} |
-- | -- | (this was an error on my part) | |
{328x} |
{328x,6} | |||
{329x} |
v. 4 (p. 110) vs. 1, 2, 4 |
{329x,2}; {329x,4} | ||
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{331x} |
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{332x} |
{332x,1}; {332x,6}; {332x,8} | {332x,8} |
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{333x} |
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{334x} |
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{335x} |
vs. 1, 3, 5, 9 | {335x,1}; {335x,3}; {335x,5}; {335x,9} | Good verses. | |
{336x} |
{336x,6} | |||
{337x} |
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{338x} |
{338x,1} = {91,13x} {338x,6} = {91,14x} |
some verses shown with ham-:tar;h {91} | ||
{339x} |
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{340x} |
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{341x} |
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{342x} |
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{343x} |
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{344x} |
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{345x} |
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{346x} |
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{347x} |
v.3 (p. 111) vs. 3, 4 |
{347x,3}; {347x,4}; {347x,7} | ||
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{348x} |
vs. 6, 7 | {348x,5}; {348x,6}; {348,7} | ||
{349x} |
vs. 1, 2, 3, 4, 8 | {349x,1}; {349x,2}; {349x,3}; {349x,4}; {349x,8} | Every verse has the maximum possible internal rhyme; remarkably swingy effect | |
{350x} |
v. 5 | |||
{351x} |
vs. 2, 3, 4 (p. 112) vs. 1, 2, 3, 4 |
{351x,1}; {351x,2}; {351x,3}; {351x,4}; {351x,5} (whole ghazal) | ||
{352x} |
vs. 1, 2, 4, 5, 6 | {352x,1}; {352x,2}; {352x,3}; {352x,4}; {352x,5}; {352x,6} (whole ghazal) | ||
{353x} |
vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) | {353x,1-7} (about the whole ghazal) | Very unusual short meter (his only use of it), swingy effect, no complexity. | |
{354x} |
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{355x} |
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{356x} |
A very late (1867) and very long (15 v.) one; witty, still powerful | |||
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{357x} |
Very early (c.1812), very notable fard . | |||
{358x} |
{358x,1} = {145,7x} {358x,2} = {145,8x} {358x,3} = {145,9x} {358x,4} = {145,10x} {358x,5} = {145,11x} |
some verses shown with ham-:tar;h {145} | ||
{359x} |
{359x,1} = {145,12x} {359x,2} = {145,13x} {359x,3} = {145,14x} {359x,4} = {145,15x} {359x,5} = {145,16x} |
some verses shown with ham-:tar;h {145} | ||
{360x} |
vs. 1-9 (whole ghazal) | {360x,1}; {360x,2}; {360x,3}; {360x,4}; {360x,5}; {360x,6}; {360x,7}; {360x,8}; {360x,9} (whole ghazal) | ||
{361x} |
vs. 1-9 (whole ghazal) | {361x,1}; {361x,2}; {361x,3}; {361x,4}; {361x,5}; {361x,6}; {361x,7}; {361x,8}; {361x,9} (whole ghazal) | {361x,3}, {361x,9}* |
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{362x} |
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{363x} |
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{364x} |
v. 6 | {364x,6}; {364x,7} | ||
{365x} |
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{366x} |
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{367x} |
-- | -- | (This was an error on my part.) | |
{368x} |
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{369x} |
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{370x} |
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{371x} |
v. 3 | {371x,3} | ||
{372x} |
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{373x} |
vs. 1, 2, 7 | {373x,1}; {373x,2}; {373x,4} | ||
{374x} |
-- | -- | (This was an error on my part.) | |
{375x} |
Short, swingy meter. | |||
{376x} |
v. 4 | {376x,4}; {376x,5} | ||
{377x} |
vs. 4, 6 | {377x,4}; {377x,5}; {377x,6} | ||
{378x} |
vs. 2, 5, 7, 8 | {378x,3}; {378x,7}; {378x,8}; {378x,9} | {378x,7} |
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{379x} |
{379x,1} | |||
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{381x} |
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{382x} |
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{383x} |
{383x,5}; {383x,6}; {383x,7} | {383x,5}* |
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{384x} |
{384x,5} | |||
{385x} |
vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) | {385x,1}; {385x,3}; {385x,4}; {385x,7} | {385x,4}* |
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{386x} |
v.5 looks a bit interesting | |||
{387x} |
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{388x} |
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{389x} |
vs. 3, 4, 6 (p. 112) vs. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6 (whole ghazal) |
{389x,3}; {389x,4}; {389x,5}; {389x,6} | {389x,6}* |
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{390x} |
v. 7 | |||
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{393x} |
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{394x} |
{394x,3} | |||
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{396x} |
v. 3 | {396x,3}; {396x,7} | ||
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{398x} |
vs. 1-7 (whole ghazal) | {398x,1}; {398x,2}; {398x,3}; {398x,4}; {398x, 5}; {398x,6}; {398x,7} (whole ghazal) | {398x,3} |
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{399x} |
vs. 4, 6, 7 | {399x,4}; {399x,7} | ||
{400x} |
v. 6 | {400x,2}; {400x,4}; {400x,6} | {400x,4} |
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{404x} |
vs. 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 7 | {404x,1}; {404x,2}; {404x,3}; {404x,4}; {404x,5}; {404x,6}; {404x,7} (whole ghazal) | relatively simple! | |
{405x} |
{405x,6} | |||
{406x} |
{406x,5} | |||
{407x} |
{407x,4} | |||
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{411x} |
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{412x} |
almost entirely exclamatory, full of -haa plurals; meter abets | |||
{413x} |
vs. 5, 8 | {413x,1}; {413x,2}; {413x,3}; {413x,4}; {413x,5}; {413x,6}; {413x,7}; {413x,8}; {413x,9} (whole ghazal) | so late-- 1865!-- and a real treat | {413x,6}; {413x,7}* |
{414x} |
{414x,3}; {414x,6}; {414x,7} | also post-1857; not bad | ||
{415x} |
fine (?) example of early abstractness | |||
{416x} |
another such example | |||
{417x} |
vs. 1-5 (the whole ghazal) | {417x,1}; {417x,2}; {417x,3}; {417x,4}; {417x,5} (whole ghazal) | straightforward, nice, some good effects | |
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{419x} |
R1988 only; problematical verse | |||
{420x} |
vs. 4, 6, 7, 8 | {420x,3}; {420x,4}; {420x,6}; {420x,7} | ||
{421x} |
{421x,2}; {421x,6} | |||
{422x} |
Raza uncertain of authenticity; rare meter, swingy but simplistic | |||
{423x} |
{423x,1}; {423x,2}; {423x,3}; {423x,4}; {423x,5} (whole ghazal) | nice little ghazal, clear and effective | ||
{424x} |
vs. 1-9 (whole ghazal) | {424x,1}; {424x,2}; {424x,3}; {424x,4}; {424x,5}; {424x,6}; {424x,7}; {424x,8}; {424x,9} (whole ghazal) | {424x,9} |
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{426x} |
1812; grandiose maqta | |||
{427x} |
vs. 1-6 | {427x,5}; {427x,6}; {427x,7} | ||
{428x} |
vs. 1, 2, 3, 5, 6, 7, 8 | {428x,6}; {428x,7} | {428x,7} |
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{429x} |
(this was an error on my part) | |||
{430x} |
{430x,5}; {430x,6}; {430x,7} | |||
{431x} |
v. 2 | {431x,5}; {431x,7} | ||
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{433x} |
{433x,3}; {433x,7} | {433x,3} |
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{434x} |
vs. 1-11 (whole ghazal) | {434x,5}; {434x,6}; {434x,11} | ||
{435x} |
vs. 4, 7 | {435x,4}; {435x,7}; {435x,8} | ||
{436x} |
{436x,4}; {436x,6} | |||
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{438x} |
{438x,3}; {438x,4}; {438x,6}; {438x,7}; {438x,8} | extremely late (1865) | ||
{439x} |
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{440x} |
vs. 1-8 (whole ghazal) | {440x,1}; {440x,2}; {440x,6}; {440x,7} | this and the next are almost (but not quite) a double-ghazal | |
{441x} |
vs. 1-8 (whole ghazal) | {441x,2}; {441x,4}; {441x,5}; {441x,6} | ||
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